Melting the Ice Maiden

I made fanart of one of my favoriiiite Shiznat fics: zeitgeistx's Melting the Ice Maiden! It's an illustration of the first arc, where Shizuru and Natsuki are basically at each other's throats.

I'm definitely not lying when I say that this one's in my top 5; the narration is witty, the storytelling is neat, the plot/characters are fresh and original, and not a word is wasted.

Look it up on ff.net, seriously. www.fanfiction.net/s/7081563/1...

(Also, how did I do on my wannabe manga style? I swear I had to redo the eyes like 45352 times because they kept turning out 'Western.')